Bait bazi....

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    ASALAM O ALIKUM TO ALL
    mein nay socha k urdu poetry ka section bait bazi k beghair udhura hai
    to mein yahan bait bazi ka thread start ker rai hun lekin itna khyal rekhiya ga k shair k end walay
    word say hi next shair start kia jaye takay bait bazi ka tempo berqar rahay
    umeed hai sub is mein hisa zarur lian gain
    to mein start kerti hun atif saeed k is shair say


    Ye meri zeest ki sb sy bari tamana thi...
    wo meray pas meray naam ki tarhan rehta...!!

    next word hai alif



     
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    usi se maang tu Irfan sadiq chorr day sab ko
    jo pathar main bhi keerron ko ghiza taqseem karta hay

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    yeh ehl e hijr ____,yeh ratoan ko jagnay walay
    yeh khud say dur kaheen zindagi guzartay hain

    next noon
     
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    nahin hay gardish e douraan pe ikhtiyaar magar
    khuda wo din nahin laaye k sogwaar ho tum....


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    maayuus-e-mohabbat hai to kar aur mohabbat
    kahte hai.n jise ishq maraz bhii hai davaa bhii

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    یہ آرزو تھی کہ اِک لمحہ تجھ سے بات کریں
    اس انتظار میں ہم کو کئی زمانے لگے

    next word also yee​
     
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    yeh kahan ki dosti hai , k banay hain dost naseh
    koi chara saz hota , koi gham gusar hota

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    ان کی محفل ھے ، یہاں رنگ دکھا اور بھی کچھ
    اے دل۔ داد طلب ____ رقص میں آ اور بھی کچھ


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    Hoye mar ke hum jo ruswa, hoye kyon na gharq e darya;
    Na kabhi janaza uthta, na kaheen mazaar hota.

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  10. Sanasir man mauji Fk Designer Fk Member

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    اُٹھایا کرتا تھا آواز ہر ستم کے خلاف..
    جہاں کوئی نہیں جاتا میں جایا کرتا تھا..

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    Ek shakhs ko samja tha phoolon ki tarha hum nay
    Wo shakhs qyamat tha kia karyn os ki batian

    NEXT noon
     
  12. Sanasir man mauji Fk Designer Fk Member

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    na wo aankh hi teri aankh thi na wo khuab hi tera khuab tha
    dil e muntazir to ye kis liay tera jaagna usay bhool ja


    next...alif
     
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    Apne siva hamare na hone ka gam kise,
    Apni talash main to ham hi ham hain dosto.

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    Wo Tu sAdYon Ka SaFAr TaIY kEr K pUhuNcHA Tha .....
    TumNe MuuN phAiR k jIss SHaKHs KO deKha BHi NaHiN


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    Na Ganwao Nawak-e-Neem Kash, Dil-e-Reza Reza Ganwa Diya,
    Jo bache hain sang samait lo, tan-e-dagh dagh luta diya..

    next ALIF
     
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    Agar choop chap tum dekhoo tu dam aram say niklay
    Idahar hum hichkee latay hain udahar tum roonay lagta hoo


     
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    nexttt waowwwww

     
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    apna zamaana aap banaate hain ahl-e-dil
    ham vo nahi k jinko zamaana banaa gaya

    next = alif
     
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    Abhi to subh ke maathe ka rang kala hai;
    Abhi fareb na khao, baRa andhera hai.


    NEXT YEH
     
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    ye shart e muhabt bhi ajeeb hey mohsin!!!
    mein pura utron to wo mayar badal deta hey

    next yeh
     

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